Statement Of Intent Feedback & LR
RANA, Arkin Mark: 4 Grade: D Comments for AQA: This is a largely clear statement of intent that shows a good concept that matches the TV crime drama brief. It fits the target audience appropriately and feels like a ‘Netflix style’ show. Media language elements are the strongest element here – good consideration of mise-en-scene and sound with connotations addressed. Camera shots weaker as lacking specific plans. Narrative disequilibrium is covered and clear idea of where extract appears in the overall series. Representation is weaker, lacking the depth required for the higher levels in the mark scheme. Point on diversity is valid but lacking terminology or theory. Audience is addressed briefly with some use of theory (Blumler & Katz) although again lacking the depth for the higher levels. Lacking more detailed discussion of target audience too. Digital convergence and print brief are not addressed. Feedback: